I think cursing can be funny, but it seems a bit forced here. I think it's just the wording; "Go on yeh gay twat" is not a very natural sounding bit of dialogue.
I disagree with Randal and find the use of swearing to be very effective specially for a comic such as this. Only problem is that your words don't match your art and so I'm getting this weird cross eyed like effect.
I think the last panel said it all, at most I'd have said. "Do you MIND?!" or "Hey! Personal space.." (swearing for it's own sake is generally not very funny.)
I encourage you to keep plugging away though. =)
MrGranger at 11:22AM, Feb. 28, 2012
Let out the anger.
NoLifeComic at 8:38AM, Oct. 22, 2011
You are very good at manga-style art!
mindcat at 10:39AM, July 28, 2011
lol! my kinda humor :)
Inkmonkey at 8:07AM, March 5, 2006
I think cursing can be funny, but it seems a bit forced here. I think it's just the wording; "Go on yeh gay twat" is not a very natural sounding bit of dialogue.
magickmaker at 4:06AM, March 3, 2006
I like it, but on the swearing thing I agree with Randal.
AdHocFerox at 8:02PM, Feb. 27, 2006
haha. what fun
Captain_Rickets at 2:34PM, Feb. 27, 2006
I disagree with Randal and find the use of swearing to be very effective specially for a comic such as this. Only problem is that your words don't match your art and so I'm getting this weird cross eyed like effect.
Randal at 9:37AM, Feb. 27, 2006
I think the last panel said it all, at most I'd have said. "Do you MIND?!" or "Hey! Personal space.." (swearing for it's own sake is generally not very funny.) I encourage you to keep plugging away though. =)